Talk:Camryn Scott: Difference between revisions
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Excellent rewrite. I was trying to get across her breadth of character and the fFact that she wants what is best, but i like how you phrased it a lot better. mine came off like a campaign speech, i see now. | |||
I like your suggestion, Laura, of a seperate section on votes. I'll start a table with this in mind. I'm not sure it will explicitly be most useful and oftfen referenced. Like I dont know we will be expected to examine her political career. but it will probably be helpful at least on some level. | |||
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Revision as of 06:23, 3 July 2005
(01-JUL-05) As more stories develop, we might want to separate her votes and political decisions into another section, just to keep the blocks of information concise. Thoughts?
Excellent rewrite. I was trying to get across her breadth of character and the fFact that she wants what is best, but i like how you phrased it a lot better. mine came off like a campaign speech, i see now.
I like your suggestion, Laura, of a seperate section on votes. I'll start a table with this in mind. I'm not sure it will explicitly be most useful and oftfen referenced. Like I dont know we will be expected to examine her political career. but it will probably be helpful at least on some level.
