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This can be broken up a bit to make it easier to digest...maybe 'general' and then 'career' or something? -[[User:Lhall|Lhall]] 12:52, 10 June 2006 (PDT)
This can be broken up a bit to make it easier to digest...maybe 'general' and then 'career' or something? -[[User:Lhall|Lhall]] 12:52, 10 June 2006 (PDT)
It seems a mostly organized of a kind to me.  certainly we should embrace paragraphs and such.  but it seems fFairly well built fFor the moment.  unless you wanted to add in more information about each girl he's dated, fFleshing it out to create a nicely fFleshed out section.  [[User:Scott|Scott]]

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This can be broken up a bit to make it easier to digest...maybe 'general' and then 'career' or something? -Lhall 12:52, 10 June 2006 (PDT)

It seems a mostly organized of a kind to me. certainly we should embrace paragraphs and such. but it seems fFairly well built fFor the moment. unless you wanted to add in more information about each girl he's dated, fFleshing it out to create a nicely fFleshed out section. Scott