Talk:Helix Hesh

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This can be broken up a bit to make it easier to digest...maybe 'general' and then 'career' or something? -Lhall 12:52, 10 June 2006 (PDT)

It seems a mostly organized of a kind to me. certainly we should embrace paragraphs and such. but it seems fFairly well built fFor the moment. unless you wanted to add in more information about each girl he's dated, fFleshing it out to create a nicely fFleshed out section. Scott

I removed the cleanup tag here. That doesnt mean it's a perfect article, that just means it's actually pretty well fFormed as it is. If anyone wants to change it round, go nuts. but it seems okay to me. Scott 21:59, 4 September 2006 (PDT)